This is pretty good for what it is as a transgender person myself I would say that there's only a couple of things I would have done and said differently but otherwise it's pretty good it's complete It doesn't overuse the idea of Regina being transgender but it doesn't just use it like a GP situation although that is one of my things that transgender is not necessarily GP
Wow thank you so much for writing this. I tried my best... I don't have any experience with gp or transgender. I just liked the idea of the story a lot and hope I don't step on anyone's feeling and tried to write it not just as a f* story like many Gp are in other fandome. Thanks so much for you time to read and comment :)
Like I said it was very well written for what it was you thought about what her backstory was you didn't just make her transgender for the sake of being transgender It wasn't like that was the main focal point I thought it was very well written
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