Comment on Heroes of Olympus/H2O: Just Add Water Crossover

1. RaptorStrikeTR on Chapter 18 Tue 19 May 2020 07:03PM UTC

   

   I like your writing. Some things seem a bit forced but so far this is really good. The chapters are a little short but I don't know how much time you have so no judgement there. All in all loving this so far.

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2. 1. softballcrazyoh on Chapter 18 Tue 19 May 2020 07:40PM UTC

      

      Thanks. This is my first fanfiction so I'm sorry if some things are forced. The chapters are short cuz I get stuck and cant think of anything else to write but I'll work on that
      Thank you for reading my story.

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