Just read all chapters today in one go and I'm speechless! I love your take on the time travel trope by adding a twist to it and deviating from the original events. Also your writing style is superb. The dynamic between Sakura and Sasukeis very good but I feel like at some of the earlier chapters Naruto kind of felt left out. But that scene after the first exam where they hugged crushed my soul!! Loved that part so much and their bond hoping to see more of those! I can't wait for the rest of the story! Thank you so much for giving life to this lovely piece 😍 Kudos!
Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm glad you like the story and my writing style 😊 In the earlier chapters, Naruto felt a bit more left out as a consequence of Sasuke and Sakura's rivalry (I'm not even sure it was a rivalry or anything at that point...more like just blatant dislike). Good news is that Naruto (and Team Seven's bond as a whole) will be getting plenty of attention in the next chapters (mainly after the second stage)
Thanks for reading! I hope you stay happy and healthy💗
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