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  1. A_nervous_fan on Chapter 58 Sun 21 Jun 2020 12:26PM UTC

    Hiya. It's been a while. How're things?

    I... I'm not really big on second-hand embarrassment, even if Yosuke deserved every bit of it. So, the start was a little much to read. F

    Kanji, though, Kanji cracked me up. "Sup." Holy wow. I'm still laughing thinking about that. He gets my vote.

    I *am* tutting at Yu and Teddie for cheating. Couldn't even give your friend a fair go? How dare you. That's not to say the aspects not affected by foul play aren't well-done, but I want to disqualify them. *shakes fist*

    Yosuke feels his sins crawling on his back, and Yu knows the look. Ouch.

    See you next chapter.

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    1. PsychicBeagle on Chapter 58 Mon 22 Jun 2020 10:36AM UTC

      Things are good, thanks for asking! I was just taking a little break from writing after polishing off college finals. I mentioned that in the notes for my last Girlfriend Thievery chapter, but I probably should have said it here, too, since some people read one but not the other. Whoops.

      I'm usually not big on embarrassment, either, but this case is connected to a lesson to be learned. I can justify bringing out the paddle for the sake of themes.

      I mean, Teddie turned his body into that of a girl, when the pageant is about guys dressing up as girls. That's definitely cheating. It seems he learned a little too much from Sensei. Neither of them were playing even remotely fair. Even so, Kanji nearly beat them with his own rugged beauty. It's like almost beating a hacker with raw skill.

      Wait a minute, both Yu and Sans are Mii skins in Smash now... That means...

      Yu: Hey, how's it going?

      Sans: Oh, you know. It's a beautiful day outside...

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