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Whoa. Whoa. Whoa.
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wHAT jUST HAPPenED???
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That was a lot. Ok.
Nice chapter!! I think you did a nice job, and Leo was a major jerk! I liked everyones outfits, and I thought the part with Spirit is hysterical. It's amazing that Kid isn't scarred for life. Kid's internal freak out was funny too.
I feel like Kid would be one of the 'quiet and calm looking omg run for your life type guys' (i.g. Leo goes blasting into the ballroom wall, a completely collected Kid with dark reaper shadows picks him up and walks outside. He comes back later, no Leo in sight. The dance continues as normal.) I think the cursing and stuff was a bit OCC, but (who cares that much).
Yeah I typically agree with you that Kid is the "quiet/calm" kind of angry, and other any other circumstance I would have him be, but he just danced with Liz and resonated with her so his emotions are not very well contained at the moment. If Patty or Maka/Tsubaki had this happen to them he would've done exactly what you said, but he doesn't know how to deal with like liking (loving, let's be real) someone. The cursing he gets from his dad. Lord Death only swears like 3 times max I think in the manga but its always a string of bad words that don't quite make sense together. I think that's more because of Japanese-to-English translation but I'm choosing to interpret it as "reapers don't understand how to swear like humans" so Kid's just saying literally any swear word he can think of rapid fire. I spent way more time than I should have on trying to figure out the outfits so I'm glad you liked them! I knew Kid's right away but pretty much everyone else was hard to decide.
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