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  1. Mrz_Ryuu on Chapter 7 Thu 02 Jul 2020 05:57AM UTC

    LOVE THIS CHAPTER AHHH!!!
    During the first part I was very nervous about Steven, I am horrible speaking in public and just reading that he was preparing for that made me very nervous haha. The good thing is that everything went well for most.
    I also loved Steven's new outfit, I love that he occupies different clothes, although it was to look more professional for his class, I think that his road trip would be a good excuse to increase his wardrobe, to fit better with people. In Beach City people are used to it, but I feel that for people who are not from that city it would be strange that he only has one outfit.
    Steven's powers came to light!!! I feel Marinette will start acting more cautiously around Steven, I hope it doesn't last long, I love the relationship they have here. Adrien will be nervous with him, I know, I hope they become good friends in the end.
    I know it would be bad for Steven in the long run, but I really wish Lila or Chloe would make him mad, the boy may seem soft, but he becomes dangerous when he gets angry. I want those two to be scared or something, I really hate them.
    Again thanks for the chapter i really enjoyed it <3 (I would love to see the art by the way).
    (Sorry for my english).

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    1. SpaceCadetMurray on Chapter 7 Thu 09 Jul 2020 11:55PM UTC

      I'm so glad to see that you loved the chapter! It was both my favorite and most nervous one to release, but seeing everyone enjoy it makes me so happy!

      I totally get what you mean, public speaking is just horrifying, and I used to do it a lot combined with being in both theatre and Shakespear. My hands would shake so much that I would always have to firmly hold onto my props. I would never have made anything particularly bad happen to Steven during it considering it's one of my worst nightmares.

      Yes! I agree, Steven's wardrobe has definitely increased since he's time on the road and abroad. While he still does sport his usual varsity jacket, as a comfort item, he definitely has way more options. I'm just bad at remembering to describing them in the fic, haha!

      Marinette's definitely gonna be more mindful, but she's gonna do her best to not let it cloud her relationship with Steven. After all, if Steven started to suspect if she was Ladybug, she herself would be hurt if he started to pull away from her. Adrien is a mixture of nervous and confused, but as soon as he gets some one-on-one talking time with Steven he'll definitely relax more.

      Steven is just waiting for a reason to snap on Lila and Chloé, he's being lenient for now, because they're much younger than him. But his patience has thinned considerably so from when he was their age.

      Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful comment, and for having taken the time to read, and no need to apologize- your English is wonderful!

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