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  1. geminnie on Chapter 7 Thu 02 Jul 2020 06:35AM UTC

    Hey! I really love your fic! I was wondering, could I try being a beta for you? I’ve really wanted to try editing for some time, and I really like where your story is going.

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    1. That_one_demonic_entity on Chapter 7 Fri 03 Jul 2020 04:44PM UTC

      Sacrifice the cheese to the mouse overlords or wonder where you're kneecaps are when you wake up in Maimi.

      HI!! I'm sorry but I'm kinda write sporadically so I'm not best person to for most editors. I'm also not in need of one, so I apologize for that; glad that you like my writings! Have a lovely day!

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      1. geminnie on Chapter 7 Sun 05 Jul 2020 08:27PM UTC

        That’s okay! You should probably start proofreading though, or getting a friend to look over it. You made 4 gramatical/spelling errors in the first paragraph of this chapter alone. You spelled strong like “stronge.” You have some really good ideas, but typos and small grammatical mistakes distract from them. Once again, I love your stuff, and I am excited to see where it goes. I really don’t mean for this to sound discouraging or mean, and I hope to see you write more awesome stuff!

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        1. That_one_demonic_entity on Chapter 7 Mon 06 Jul 2020 01:37AM UTC

          Sacrifice the cheese to the mouse overlords or wonder where you're kneecaps are when you wake up in Maimi.

          Thanks, Im planning on going over all my fics for grammatical errors once I finish them. Have a lovely day!

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