Very very very good!!!!!! Sumire and Akechi's darts game convo was so excellent and finally brought them together on the same page! Akechi couldn't edgelord his way out of this friendship! Their breakfast together was adorable too. And that battle!!! Akira dodging beautifully and not ever wanting them hurt because he loves his friends so freaking much <3<3<3 And the super hurt of the one to actually land that blow being Metatron, uggggh, that's so much. A really great chapter! Looking forward to the conclusion!
THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! that darts game was absolutely one of the scenes I thought of that inspired me to write this entire fic, like it was NECESSARY for it to happen so I'm super happy you liked it!!! and thank you so much!! the breakfast scene is so fun to write and characterize because these two have never really been happy in each others company heehe and I'm really glad the battle was good for you :-) writing Akira was such a breath of fresh air let me tell you its so FUN to write his cocky attitude and IM REALLY GLAD YOU CAUGHT THAT METATRON THING!!!! i was worried it wouldn't make sense but YAY! thank you so much for reading and leaving your lovely comments i really do appreciate it so so much :D
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