That was awesome. I absolutely loved the fight scene, as it felt quite Undertale-ish. You nailed Papyrus' personality and his responses felt realistic. I loved the banter in this chapter as well. Also, way to portray Chara's feelings. They made sense, and were relatable. Also, also, Frisk and flirting, always a plus. Dang, that was me just gushing wasn't it? Anyway, good job, hope your doing well.
aw thank you!! I like you gushing it's a very good motivator! I'm doing great, I'm glad you liked Papyrus being goofy! it's kinda hard to write him i think since his humor is so... random? but like a good random so it's hard to nail down. also SOO glad you like Chara's mental back and forth! I tried to portray it in a way that was interesting but not just "dur chara confused" (though it mightve came out that way)? ugh anyways I'm rambling now I made a tumblr just for that reason and I still ended up doing it lmfao, Thanks for reading!!
Your welcome! I'm glad my gushing is being put to good use, haha. Yeah, I think random is a pretty accurate we to describe Papyrus, humor and all. And I think your portrayal of Chara is infact amazing. Also, I can totally relate with the rambling. After all, I constantly make long af comments like these so... oof. Anyway, I just moved back to the States from Germany, and this comment made my day. Hope your doing well, -Bean.
Thank you for the support I'm doing great!! I'll try to keep the characters as, well, in character as I can lmao. I'm glad your travels are going well :D
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