I have to admit that the prologue didn't entirely convince me, but I thought that I should give the first chapter a try and I am very glad I did. I love how you are characterizing Severus here, and your writing style is great. I really don't think that being a bit selfish is a bad thing for Snape considering the situation, it is clear that the war is something much bigger than him, and there is no point in trying to change that. Sometimes being selfish is just the healthy choice to take. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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devi98 on Chapter 2 Fri 25 Sep 2020 06:11PM UTC
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