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  1. csad on Chapter 10 Sat 17 Oct 2020 09:08PM UTC

    Oooh! The video is ready to go and online! Can't wait to see the fallout in the next chapter! ❤️❤️

    The video didn't have a segment with Crimson and Noir in it speaking up for the victims though. Pity. I'd somehow gotten the impression it would. Or are they going to give Alya an interview after that video gets some traction? 🤔

    I loved the way the hat contest went in this story! Especially that bit at the end about synthetic feathers and Marinette's ready solution to create one before June!

    It was surprising though that Gabriel was not an asshat and actually put his son's health above it all when he said "you're a model, you don't get a say". A surprisingly benign underlying reason for such a harsh reply.

    Also, "cat chasing pigeons"? Oh, Plagg! 😹

    I wouldn't do so normally, but I think I can readily bring up to your attention these two typos without sounding like a nitpicker, because they're frankly hilarious:

    Adrien was there during the nearly all of the filming, acting both as a cameraman and couch

    He was only able to take one bite of the macaron before slipping it into his pocket for Tikki, knowing she'd appreciate the surgery treat.

    While I'm sure canon Marinette would love to have Adrien acting as her couch even as she died of embarrassed delight, I'm not sure how this story's Marinette would see it. 😂 Plus, not sure if the others there, like Nino, would be more likely to make fun of Adrien for it or just think "Group cuddle. Cool." 😂

    Also pretty sure Tikki would not enjoy surgery as a treat. At all. 😂

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    1. 11JJ11 on Chapter 10 Sat 17 Oct 2020 10:02PM UTC

      They definitely wanted to, but their identities could have come into question if they had popped up suddenly knowing about the interviews, and the heroes have not yet given anyone an interview, so the idea of getting a private one from them is more of a dream than a possible reality for Alya at the moment.

      Without Gabe being hyper focused on being Hawk Moth he actually has time to do other things-- like actually caring about his child.

      He was promised cheese. xD

      Thank you for catching those typos!! They have been fixed!

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