Ash (Guest)
on Chapter 10
Thu 12
Nov 202004:13AM UTC
I really enjoyed this story! You write AFO very well, getting deep inside his twisted head. I also like how I can tell that OFA is actually a strong person despite what his brother thinks of him--he's still trying his hardest and managed to pull several tricks. There's a lot of subtle stuff going on in this story; I'm honestly impressed.
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Ash (Guest) on Chapter 10 Thu 12 Nov 2020 04:13AM UTC
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