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  1. Dervila on Chapter 3 Sun 29 Nov 2020 11:37AM UTC

    My poor heart, Crowley is so cute when he's trying to be nice ^^ (and dying from emabarrassement).
    This chapter ends too soon for me, I'd like to read about their shared ride whole night! Pleaaaaaase they're utterly adorable!
    Oh, and also I absolutely love the idea of their almost-looks-like-cursed rides as only way to spend time together.

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    1. ineffablefool on Chapter 3 Mon 30 Nov 2020 05:44AM UTC

      welcome to the Soft Zone(TM)

      Like I said in another comment, I purposefully limited myself to short chapters for this fic to see how it worked out, but that really does cut down on the amount of banter I can write. A lesson learned!

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      1. Dervila on Chapter 3 Mon 30 Nov 2020 06:46AM UTC

        Oh I'm sorry, I didn't read other comments and I didn't mean to reproach or critize you! I very much love your story, that's all. Any length of chapters is acceptable :)

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        1. ineffablefool on Chapter 3 Mon 30 Nov 2020 06:54AM UTC

          welcome to the Soft Zone(TM)

          You did not come across as critical! I, however, am being a wee bit critical of Past Jack, but only because this was his idea. Way to go, Past Jack!

          ("Like I said elsewhere" was more like "this isn't an original idea I had just for you, I'm plagiarizing from myself, but...")

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