Comment on Tempting Fate

  1. marshmallowtasha on Chapter 1 Fri 21 Aug 2015 10:16PM UTC

    "My ‘sweet cheeks’ aren’t the ones I’m concerned about," >> and I spit water across my computer screen!

    “The glory? The front row tickets to crazy town? The precarious balance on the edge of financial destitution? Take your pick pal.” >> The banter! It's all so good!!!

    You have to ask if we want an epilogue?!?! GIMME!!!

    Seriously, this is fantastic!

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    1. TroubleScout on Chapter 1 Sat 22 Aug 2015 03:20PM UTC

      Hehe, you're "fantastic" just made my morning. I worked ridiculously hard on all the banter, so I'm SO glad you enjoyed! Thank you for taking the time to let me know. I love hearing which lines landed.

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