I will definitely read on. It I've already seen some improvement, and I always look for a fic where people continuously improve or maintain a decently high standard.
I will be happy to read on, but I would recommend thinking about going back and putting in even just a paragraph or a couple of sentences here and there because it it's just something that seems strange that she would overlook, especiallyat this stage. I've found in my own stories that going back and re writing the 1st chapters, or just revamping them can really enhance a story and bring in more readers. You don't even have to do all of the previous chapters, just the 1st 3 or 4. One of my stories in particular I have revamped twice, and I didn't realize that it is as long as it is, now. When I first wrote it, it was probably 2/3 of the length that is now, but it's much more comparable to the later stories I wrote in the series. I also realized that it really does fit better, in word count, theme and in quality.
Honestly, if that's the worst problem, I think you're doing pretty good. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. :) Most Sakura time travel fics have her coming back to when she's about 5 or 6 sometimes even a little younger, and she would be friends Sasuke and Naruto and all the other future clan heads… I don't think I've seen very many where she comes back specifically to the genin test and I have to admit I'm enjoying be experience. Like I said, I particularly loved that she is just so upset at Sasuke. May not be perfect, but what fic is? I will definitely read on.
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