Comment on Brave New World: Gilded Earth

1. femme4jack on Chapter 18 Sun 07 Feb 2021 07:15PM UTC

   

   Fantastic update!!! I’m so excited to see where this goes. I adore your portrayal of Jack trying to both be the responsible big brother and save the world. Optimus would be so proud. Soundwave’s obvious affection (and adoption?) of Raf could lead to interesting developments in the future.

   Loved this so much that I re read the whole story and enjoyed even more the second time!

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2. 1. TheFriendlyCritiquer on Chapter 18 Mon 08 Feb 2021 04:44AM UTC

      

      THANK YOU! I'm so glad you like it enough to re-read it!

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