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  1. lavenderletters on Chapter 1 Sun 28 Feb 2021 05:35AM UTC

    You built them up so well, I can't wait to see what happens next
    Using techno as the pov makes sense as someone trying to almost keep himself separated from the conflict yet still so tied to it... this hurt me real bad basically

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    1. meridies on Chapter 1 Thu 04 Mar 2021 06:16AM UTC

      techno’s pov was the one thing i never changed when this plot was first going thru revisions, it just fit too well. glad u agree n thank u for reading!! <3

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