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  1. Yin Thu 24 Sep 2015 02:21PM UTC

    This was a really cute and very sweet romance story. I really liked how you wrote Sarge and Grey throughout it (and the other characters too when they were mentioned in the story!), and their interactions together were quite well-written and fitting for both I thought. ♥ This was a lovely read, through and through. :D

    Last Edited Thu 24 Sep 2015 02:22PM UTC

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    1. Sugarfire (SephMichiRook) Thu 24 Sep 2015 05:24PM UTC

      Thank you so much. Being OOC is my biggest fear, it's really nice to hear I'm getting it right.

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