No I really appreciate your feedback! It’s helpful to know which parts are confusing so I know what to elaborate on in future chapters. And yep that’s pretty much it. I didn’t talk about Reflection’s appearance much bc he’s pretty plain-looking (limp black hair, clean-shaven) except for that weird eye glint thing he has going on. I thought a plain, forgettable face would be an interesting contrast with his sus personality (and his overcooked lookalike in the hospital). Love your censorship btw 😩 I have a headcanon that Natsuo censors “D*d” and “End*avor” when he texts his siblings
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EveryoneThinksImGay on Chapter 7 Thu 11 Mar 2021 10:05PM UTC
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