I absolutely love the way that Phil tries and clings to memories, searching through what he did as if he will find answers there even if it's apparent that it wasn't anything like that, he did his best as far as we know. The way he treats the letters is so gentle and soft. It seems like he's treating those letters as pieces left behind from Wilbur, because that's all he has left besides the memories, but those same letters just make more doubt to rise in his chest it seems, and even more guilt because maybe as father he thinks he should have notices?
And Techno's and Phil's dynamic is awesome, the way they just live in harmony and just know the right thing to do or at least attempt to. THO YOUR DESCRIPTION OF TECHNO AND PHIL RULING THE EMPIRE IS GREAT AND IT MAKES SENSE. It makes it feel as if Techno was always anarchist at heart but he didn't know it? He thought that what he did was right until he realized it wasn't, and Phil just went with it because he's his best friend. That's literally so beautiful and finding someone that understands and respects you that much is so incredible and the way you painted it is so wonderful .
ALSO THE WAY PHIL SEES DREAM- You literally painted the 'Lmanburg and Wilbur shaped everyone's picture of dream' so incredibly well.
I love this so much! Thank you so much for this wonderful story (tho im very angry at twitter for not showing me this earlier)
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farmsicle on Chapter 1 Thu 11 Mar 2021 11:08PM UTC
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