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  1. LoveRain (Guest) on Chapter 10 Mon 28 Sep 2015 07:01PM UTC

    Sorry, but I can not comment only once.
    I hate how much Louis seemed to really love that asshole hypocritical traitor. I hope you know very well how to show his love for Harry. I loved that harry respected the time Louis and would not go further up in the water. Louis wanted so badly but Harry was sympathetic and sensible and resisted what he most desired because it was not the time. He made me very proud.
    I love the characterization and personality of the two, but you did an incredible job in characterizing harry. And writing that mixes prose and poetry, the new plot that always manages to surprise me.
    Again this chapter has shown that you deserve all the praise and all the love.

     

    P.S: Please don't kill me worry again. I thought you had left the fic.

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    1. MrsStylinson on Chapter 10 Thu 01 Oct 2015 11:11PM UTC

      Haha that's okay, I love comments :D
      Harry is very much taking care of Louis in the best way he knows how. His self control isn't always perfect but he definitely does his best.
      Thank you!!!
      Don't stress, I promise I will never leave the fic :) Sometimes I just need a bit more time due to various commitments and the fact that writing can often be a bit gruelling despite how much I enjoy it.

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