unimpressed reader (Guest)
on Chapter 6
Tue 29
Sep 201511:50AM UTC
i love your fic so far. i really do. the writing's good, the plot's good, everything is good... except for eggsy's extensive ruminations on singapore, some of which which, quite frankly, i found rather unnecessary and bordering on rude. "babbling"? "paranoia"? really?
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