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  1. Duskfalls (Guest) on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Oct 2015 08:09PM UTC

    Sometimes I get thrown off by writing in 2nd person POV but you wrote a very different dynamic of Miranda and Andrea's relationship where Andrea's immediate coolness towards Miranda is challenging and fun to read. I'm intrigued by how the story will continue, please update soon! :)

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    1. JustLikeAPapercut on Chapter 1 Tue 06 Oct 2015 08:33PM UTC

      I have never enjoyed second person, frankly. But I started writing this a while ago and this style of narration was the only thing that gave it the right texture, so I decided to make myself try something new (and scary).

      Thanks for the comment and thanks for reading!

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