Ah, thank you so much for commenting! I’m so glad you liked the more realistic portrayal of a fight scene, I really wanted it to be a moment of realisation for Ramona, of just how dire this situation is but I couldn’t have her completely defenceless so I spent ages writing and rewriting that scene.
Secondly, while not written, Ramona did get a brief check-up, the shaking was partly due to the chaos of the whole day and also the adrenaline wearing off. Also, Moody refrained from explaining anything since we all know how paranoid he is, he didn’t see any need in risking someone else getting any information so he chose to leave Ramona in the dark.
Finally, I can’t promise much in terms of Meliorism, I have very little motivation for it (or anything to be honest) at the moment due to lots of stress and pressure in my personal life but I do plan on getting back to it at some point in the near (hopefully) future.
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MyBeanieIsALiar on Chapter 11 Sat 24 Apr 2021 03:34PM UTC
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