Comment on And So he Changed

  1. katydid on Chapter 10 Mon 03 May 2021 12:27AM UTC

    It's so creepy how AFO does manipulations like eating a burger while watching his brother and lying to his brother about the time of day. There's not even a reason for the last one, he just does it to maintain control.

    I like "the vault his brother had been put in for his… sleeping needs." because it shows how delusional AFO is. He knows what he's done is messed-up but he won't admit to himself how strange it is to stick his brother in a bank vault.

    "One hand came and pinched his cheek, provoking another perturbed pout from the defenceless thing between his arms." --> AFO is a prime example of an older brother bully.

    First doesn't trust AFO, and I don't trust him either.

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