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  1. IwaKitsune on Chapter 2 Thu 13 May 2021 02:36AM UTC

    I really really am enjoying the way you write Nia, she’s fun and also ma’am you need a hug really bad. Also brighid I care you so much

    God I love the thought of Morag and Vandham knowing each other, I really think they could have been good friends, but alas,,, sobs into hands vandad I miss you every day of my life.

    THERE HE IS!! SON BOY!! Not so little anymore ;A; And not doing his best either, death kinda does that to you, big f

    Nia’s braincell: oh no I need to be a proper lady because this is the ruler of a country
    Also nia’s braincell: -/turns the sass dial to 11-
    Dromarch you’re godsent and I love you

    Kdjsfhskjdfhsdf I’ll cry the exchange between them. They are trying so hard and I’m proud of them but god, god you two are a mess huh.

    God I love Percy, sir you’re an absolute menace and cryptic poet who has NO sense of ‘too much’ and it really shows and we love you for it.

    Ouu I can already see some differing HCs, but this is so fun so far and I’m loving it :3c {Also I'm glad that the advice I gave you on last one helped a bit here! For the formatting that is haha. Also like other comment mentioned, there IS a missing word "think", from Mòrag in the part shortly after they leave for the night if you need help finding it!}

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    1. Kalahamsa on Chapter 2 Thu 13 May 2021 07:13PM UTC

      Ahh I'm so glad you liked!! Nia def only has one braincell but it's working SO hard fladsjflaskdj also morag and vandham would have def been best friends and also arm-wrestled at least once

      Yes! I think next chap is when I'll really start diverting from canon so I'm excited to see what everyone thinks!!

      And YES thank you both I looked so hard for it but sometimes... brain off ya know??

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      1. IwaKitsune on Chapter 2 Fri 14 May 2021 04:38AM UTC

        The braincell is hard at work, it's not its fault that it only has one setting that might not be fitting for the situation, tiny f for respect
        You're absolutely right they would have arm-wrestled at LEAST once because morag does not know how to say no to a challenge and vandham was all in for the fun of good-natured competition

        Oh I'm excited on that! I do wonder which direction you're gonna go with canon divergence, the possibilities are endless and I got popcorn and a comfy chair

        God I feel that, if not for my friend Pigeon helping as beta-reader there would be so many typos in my fics,,, english is Hard and words like in/on and breath/breathe are my enemies, even with checking they still slip by sometimes sobs

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