Comment on How Dare You Semicolonize My Mind

  1. nykolino Mon 24 May 2021 04:05PM UTC

    your writing style is honestly so captivating. the story flow is just.. well, yeah, it flows. it flows right. it flows right and effortlessly, and the words seem to attach to one another so easily. i can't wait for the other two parts, i can already tell how pretty this story will be!

    i can genuinely feel their connection sprouting, and that makes it so realistic. also, the feeling of sudden familiarity and the realisation that "hey, maybe i just didn't notice it before, maybe it's not actually that sudden" is so normal and i am really happy to see it included in the plot. this just.. feels right. it truly feels like two people who are slowly starting to develop a connection that they didn't have before.

    i love this. ♡︎

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    1. minsungfootsie Tue 25 May 2021 08:44AM UTC

      Hello, hello! I remember that you left a comment on my other fic, too, so thaaaannkk yooouuu for reading and appreciating this as well! <3 <3 <3

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