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  1. Cym on Chapter 3 Thu 10 Jun 2021 09:49PM UTC

    It's very late, so I'll need to read this again at some point before being able to give you the appropriate feedback you deserve ^^ Pretty sure I missed something, here...

    But it's been a pleasure to see this universe come back to life, thank you!

    EDIT: I'm awake!

    I really enjoyed the energy in this chapter. There's rhythm, suspense, and you can almost feel the adrenaline rushing through Alex's veins at some points, which makes the scenes all the more captivating.

    Alex's crazy plan is sooo good. The Queen, really? And how he bullshits guards he is exactly where he belongs... Plus, the fact that it works because of MI6's mistakes is a delight ^^

    Tom and Nile are a joy to read. Nile's line about cheetahs was pure genious ^^

    And Jones' fascination in Yassen is fascinating in return... Wondering what John told her about Yassen... How much she really knows or suspects...
    ... Hm. Sorry. How much she suspectED until she pissed off Nile.

    Thanks for sharing and finishing this, reading you was real pleasure ^^

    Last Edited Fri 11 Jun 2021 06:00PM UTC

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