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  1. Bounemr on Chapter 7 Tue 10 Nov 2015 02:01PM UTC

    (Platonic touchy is literally my segue into the next chapter I'm so bad)

    But yeah Nathanael is a big cutie he deserved to be protected (good thing there's two superheroes willing to do just that huh?)

    I successfully turned our ridiculous love square into a love... Idek like a love flowchart or something. A love web. that's it that'll work. And everything is wonderful :3

    Thanks for reviewing!!!

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    1. Magical_Awesome_Kid on Chapter 7 Wed 11 Nov 2015 06:46AM UTC

      I love the use of "Flow Chart" because it reminds me in eight grade I tried to figure out what was going on in Tempest by Shakespeare and was like "let's make a flow chart!"

      It got really messy really fast, and I ended up redrawing it like "OMG what is going on here like how can he like her when she likes her but she's dressed up as her brother and..."

      So, yeah.

      Ok, but, quick question: does Nathanael have any lingering feelings for Mari or Lady after the whole Evillustrator incident? Just curious (and it fuels the plot bunnies).

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      1. Bounemr on Chapter 7 Wed 11 Nov 2015 04:00PM UTC

        Currently (that is, as of part 7) Nathanael still has a lingering crush on Marinette and he admires Ladybug. Officially, as far as this story is concerned, Nathanael does NOT have a crush on Ladybug.

        If things go according to plan then you can expect Nathanael and Mari/Lady's relationship to be better addressed soon (within the next few chapters, most likely starting during Mari's pov in part 9, but I haven't actually written it yet so I say this with the caveat that it's subject to change)

        Hope that clears up a bit and maybe gets you all excited for more ;3

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        1. Magical_Awesome_Kid on Chapter 7 Fri 13 Nov 2015 01:19AM UTC

          GOT IT (adds to Love Flow Chart)

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