Oh I LOVE this. One you have exactly how I picture Donut's body type which can feel rare. Donut is a farm boy, he's going to have the muscle power to show for it.
The dinner date sequence was amazing. I just love Donut casually catching and tossing that grenade back.
Locus's prose felt very natural and true to his character. I loved reading it and everything here feels like it could be canon. Their interactions were fun. Donut's dialogue flowed so we'll.
I just love everything about this and am definitely adding Locnut to one of my fave rvb ships overall now.
Aww, thanks! Yeah, Donut is a farm boy, he's got some muscle! And we know he has an amazing throwing arm.
Writing Locus was so fun, even with a tricky POV. And I'm glad you enjoyed this rare pair! I feel like every single Donut rare pair is amazing, but Locus/Donut is definitely one of the top ones. :D Thanks for reading!
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