Comment on Promise that I'll never be good again

  1. CentaureaLinum Wed 07 Jul 2021 09:18AM UTC

    Ouch, that hurt.
    This was so well written but damn, Adam's feelings.
    I know how bad it can hurt feeling worthless and unwanted.

    And Kavinsky is an absolute asshole as always.
    I don't know what is worse and what would have been the most damaging to Adam, what Kavinsky said to him (“It’s not even worth it to break Lynch’s Goddamn heart. There are better ways to do that. You’re not worth the hassle.”) or if they had cross the line and actually kissed.

    I also really liked the very detailed way everything is described, especially when they are in the car, on the road. I felt like I was there with them.

    This was really good and very well written in a painful kind of way.
    Hope to read more of your stuffs.
    ❤️

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    1. Infinatesky Mon 26 Jul 2021 01:41AM UTC

      Wow thank you so much for this comment! And I apologize that it took me so long to reply to you.

      I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic! I had a great time writing Kavinsky here because he is such a different character than I usually write, and in this moment both him and Adam were in a desperate headspace. It would have definitely been interesting to see what would have happened, and how it would have affected Adam, if they had kissed.

      Thanks again for reading and for letting me know your thoughts! If you have any ideas for any sort of fic you want to request, you can send me an ask or a direct message to my Tumblr (linked in the note at the end of this fic)! <3

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