Unrequited love 😩😩😩 is possibly the most painful love. Loving a person from afar may be benign but when the object of your affection falls in love with another then that’s when the hurt becomes more acute and takes root. Real ouch! Like take-my-breath-away painful!
How you wrote Pen’s thoughts here is absolutely stunning & true! The conflict and the giddiness felt raw.
How could a dance mean everything to one person and less than nothing to the other?
I wish to quote the whole work bc it’s just so lovely, but 👆🏻 was my favorite part!!!
Thank you for this treasure 🫂🥺
tysm for this incredible, amazing feedback! Polin is a great ship and unrequited love is one of my favorite things to write - I'm so glad you liked it!
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