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1. Account Deleted Sat 24 Jul 2021 02:04PM UTC

   I WANT TO SEE MORE FROM YOU. This is genuinely good, okay? I expect to see more. The writing style is very simple and not over complicated with strings of too-big-words or messy sentences. This is so so so so good and I hope you get a larger hit count than what you have. You described the kissing very well (which is a hard thing to do without being repetitive) and you had a broad variety of verbs on deck— always nice. I hope you really get your works out there because THIS, this deserves it bestie. :)

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2. 1. ivorysteel Sun 25 Jul 2021 11:51AM UTC

      

      thank you!!!!! this is so sweet - and thank you for your continued support on everything :) <3

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