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1. Acaranna on Chapter 2 Wed 18 Sep 2013 05:43PM UTC

   

   I wouldn't have thought that I would enjoy reading a story about age-regression. But I adored yours. I'm definitely looking forward to reading more from you. You captured the child-like voice quite well and I'm amazed how you wrote John. So loving and caring.

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2. 1. rivalshipping on Chapter 2 Thu 19 Sep 2013 04:52PM UTC

      

      Thank you very much!!! This is getting a lot more positive feedback than I thought it would.

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   2. 1. Acaranna on Chapter 2 Thu 19 Sep 2013 05:12PM UTC

         

         Well, you have a really great style and make the decisions and feelings believable.^^ If only for that this little piece of arts goes to my favourites list.^^

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