Jesus Christ, I'm excited for this. A little scared, but excited. I thought this was just going to be a one-shot at first, so I was really excited when I read the bottom Author's Note and realized that there was more of this. I can't wait to see where this goes! I just- I don't really know how to express my feelings for this fic. They're mostly positive! I'm just- EXCITED! I feel like I'm apprehensive, but like, in a positive way, if that makes sense? Yay! Just going of this chapter, this is going to be really good.
I loved, LOVED, the style of writing you used throughout the entire chapter. Your writing is very... immersive, I guess? That's not really it. You have a way of writing that brings people in, gets them hooked so they're JUST reading, and the background things are second fiddle until they're done. IDK if that's a great description of it, but I ADORE your writing. This was a great read and I look forward to more!
I'm very glad you're excited, but I am also glad you're apprehensive. Is it wrong to tell you you should be? Well, at the risk of spoilers, let's just say that things aren't going so great for Peter in chapter 2...
Thank you so much for your kind comment!!! I'm glad you enjoy my writing :'))
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