My brain won't let this be, so I'm sorry if I'm being rude. But gods dam, those wings are waaay too tiny! You'd need at least 3×(it's barely 2× his height) the height of shoto as his wing span for him to be able to glide and not plummet immediately to the ground. In this case you'd need a 5.4m/17.7ft wing span. And those wing need to be *Hot* to keep him up in the air. Sorry for the criticism but i researched too much stuff on wings and those kind of stuff for my brain to leave it be.👉👈😓 But i absolutely love the concept! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.♡
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