Comment on An Era of Restoration - Revised

1. Evergreen (Guest) on Chapter 16 Sun 05 Sep 2021 03:27AM UTC

   Excellent! Loved every bit, & Anora is a gem.

   I do have two specific criticisms to make, though. 1, The end part of the conflict didn't quite compare to the one in the original fic. It just didn't seem quite as dramatic. 2, it doesn't say why Mipha and Link were teleported out of Vah Ruta.

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2. 1. Ebony_McCloud on Chapter 16 Sun 05 Sep 2021 05:08AM UTC

      

      Thank you!

      And I'm sorry, but those are not specific at all. What do you mean by "end part of the conflict?" The conflict is far from over. Do you mean one of the scene endings?

      And, as for the second, that didn’t seem appropriate to me considering their time on Mipha ended in Link’s perspective. And, I don't understand why that matters. Can you explain a bit more?

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   2. 1. Evergreen (Guest) on Chapter 16 Sun 05 Sep 2021 07:23PM UTC

         I meant the end of the fight between Mipha and Link vs the Blight. Sorry for the misunderstanding!

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      2. 1. Ebony_McCloud on Chapter 16 Sun 05 Sep 2021 07:32PM UTC

            

            Okay, so what makes this version inferior?

            And what about your second point?

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