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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Sun 18 Dec 2011 11:01AM UTC

    Hooooly fuck, woman.

    Where do I begin.

    This is... this is like a "hit winzler's buttons" kinkapalooza. Rinzler. Rinzler, being inhuman, /alien/, from the way he moves (and ungh, the strength) to the way he talks. The bolded text makes him sound faintly vocoder-y in my head and that gives me delicious shivers. Saying that he /used to be/ Tron, and the line "I fight for me" -- I had to stop reading here, breathe, squee in my chair, breathe again, and go back to the text. And oh god, Sam... he is so wonderfully human in his confusion and acceptance and horror and even /interest/ all mixed up.

    Not to mention the terrifying shades of /what was Flynn up to, good god.../ - I love you, Shiny. I am so happy this fandom has you, and hope you stick around.

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    1. a_shiny_mess (magpie4shinies) on Chapter 1 Sun 18 Dec 2011 03:09PM UTC

      Awwww! Thank you! I'm so glad it turned out well. I need to go back through again with a fine-toothed tense comb, but yay! I actually had some problems with Rinzler at first because I kept wanting to write him noticing social cues he wouldn't, or wouldn't deem important. Yeah, this is kind of fucked up for Sam.

      Haha, Flynn is just. Everywhere. Nobody can really get away from his interference. I intend to add more, I just need a break to write all the other things.

      You're so sweet! *hugs* Thank you so much. You guys keep me coming back! <3

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      1. Account Deleted on Chapter 1 Wed 21 Dec 2011 12:12PM UTC

        I actually had some problems with Rinzler at first because I kept wanting to write him noticing social cues he wouldn't, or wouldn't deem important.

        I know what you mean but there's no trace of it - this is simply marvellous!

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