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1. Sakine Sun 26 Sep 2021 05:13AM UTC

   

   Ahh, I love how you preserves their characterization, much appreciated. Favorite scene was detention, and it made me wish this fix was longer so I could’ve had more of those. And even when they had the altercation, it was done more realistically and without cringy drama. Props, and I thank you for the read.

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2. 1. JackalopeRising Sun 26 Sep 2021 08:17PM UTC

      

      Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I was trying really hard to balance realistic characters/development while also still leaning into the whole stereotypical and cliché high school vibe I like

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