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  1. xXxBishopxXx on Chapter 18 Fri 15 Oct 2021 04:55AM UTC

    Certainly don't mind a bit of cliche when it's written so well. I'll never get over how excited I get whenever I see that's you've updated. Kaidan missing Shepards touch was adorable, and trying not to get distracted by a man like the Commander ? Yeah, good luck with that, Kaidan.

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    1. Androgene on Chapter 18 Fri 15 Oct 2021 03:05PM UTC

      I'm very pleased you enjoyed it.

      I couldn't resist the cliche. I told myself in the beginning I was going to avoid cliches, then I came to this setting and it was just too good an opportunity to pass up. Also, their romance needs progression because it's half the story.

      I'm hard at work with chapter twenty. I'm hoping to churn out chapters twenty and twenty-one by the end of next week.

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