OOOOOOOH that hurt so good, really tucking expertly at the ol' heartstrings with Zoro's badly hidden distress, poor guy just wants to help his man but he doesn't know how. I love the details Sanji both notice and/or dismisses, like the pillow, it's like the perfect amount of breadcrumbs to the bigger picture. I can't wait for part two! Thank you for writing this!
Zoro is Not Having A Good Time, it’s true. He just wants his man back :((( And I’m glad you liked my little hints, especially the pillow! I was trying not to be too obvious in them but to still make it clear that something is fundamentally off about the situation. Hopefully it worked :))
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