Dude, I will give you -all- the serotonin holee crap! This is fantastic!
I love love love how you characterize Edas reaction to this, finding out she's pregnant and being So Mad but as soon as she sees it's Raine she just. How could she ever be mad at someone she's still so intensely in love with? And her first thought isn't to be happy or relieved she's not having a baby with a complete stranger, it's to think that she completely ruined their life?? But of course Raines not thinking about that, they're just so grateful that she waltzed back into their life for a SECOND TIME and oops, now you're having a kid together surprise! But because they're the sweetest thing around and they love her so much all they want to do is comfort her and apologize and tell her that they're there for her and no fucking wonder Eda loves them so much when you characterize them SO WELLLLLL
And Eda just?? Breaking down because she's so exhausted and she's finally with someone she can talk to and who cares about her?! My dude, the pain you have caused me on this day is EXQUISITE. And now Raine gets to hold little baby Luz and protect and love and take care of them BOTH. (side note I'm intensely curious about what parent name Raine gets. Like I know a lot of people have been using O'Pa for them, but there's also Nobi, Baba, etc...).
I know you said no regular updates on this one but I highly, highly look forward to anything you choose to do with it!
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B_Quiet on Chapter 1 Thu 18 Nov 2021 03:46PM UTC
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