I don't know if it was your intention to potray Dogwarts as the villians, idk I just expected we would see a 'neutral' version of sorts, but the fact that most of us feel no remorse in Martyn's death shows its written to make us feel that way. Im so excited for the climax!
Yeah, Martyn's death did have the effect I wanted it to have, so that has been successful. I'm excited, too! We're getting into it soon. Thanks for the review!
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A_Stranded_Grand_Admiral on Chapter 23 Fri 26 Nov 2021 03:25PM UTC
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Writer207 on Chapter 23 Sat 27 Nov 2021 01:26PM UTC
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