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  1. JoWithTheFlow on Chapter 1 Sun 28 Nov 2021 10:59PM UTC

    You know what I've been looking forever to find what chapter this comment is located on and just can't find it so I'm just going to reply through my inbox and hope for the best lol.

    You see, Izuku having an intelligence Quirk? Very believable. I also often wonder if the various incarnations of Izuku in fanfiction of intelligence Quirks too. But me having one? Me? You flatter me. You flatter me very much.

    But thank you so much for reading, commenting, and giving this story your support!

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    1. Sin_of_Sloth on Chapter 1 Sun 28 Nov 2021 11:36PM UTC

      omg sorry for the confusion!! 😭 i was referring to when All Might asks if Midoriya had one because of his explanation for his fake quirk. I thought was clever because giving an activation requirement on something like emotion would be hard to prove and it fits with his background. Also because I just thought the name and explanation was cool!

      I also got caught up and some parts had me yelling in shock! Awesome work!!

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      1. JoWithTheFlow on Chapter 1 Mon 29 Nov 2021 03:14AM UTC

        Ah I found you this time! You gave me a clue that it was chapter 1 lmao. But also! Don't worry about it, it's a little difficult to hunt down where exactly a comment is when it's not on the most recent chapter, but I still love comments on older chapters just as equally as comments on newer ones, even if I can't find them immediately 😂

        But thank you! I came up with a lot of wild stuff for this story, but Inner Storm is still one of my absolute favorite ones. You're exactly right - I chose an emotional activation to make it appropriately vague that Izuku could explain why it was so late, while also making it oddly specific enough that it would likely throw AFO off if he was searching through the Quirk registry trying to find the successor, which was something Izuku was worried about.

        Caught up, huh? That most recent chapter shocked a lot of people I think 😂 Feel free to yell at me about it in the comments if there's more you want to say, though!

        Thanks so much ☺️

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