Actually, I don't think you needed to spell it out more than you did. I mean, everyone around her behaved as if she were 5 (or an appropriate age around that, like 3-6, really). The way you wrote it was really awesome! I wasn't kidding about this fic eating me. Plus, I loved all of Dawn's interactions.
*jaw drops* Oh gods, that part II would be incredible! But yes, complicated, so complicated. Hey, if you win the lottery, and feel the urge to write it, I would not complain AT ALL. <3
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DenaCeleste on Chapter 14 Thu 07 Jan 2016 06:13PM UTC
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