Comment on open your eyes (for the fireworks)

  1. inkandstone on Chapter 1 Wed 29 Dec 2021 09:29PM UTC

    The family will believe that it was probably because of an accident with the house and magic. Also, the cracks are still there when Luisa and the others find Mirabel. Thats because Casita was too busy trying to get help than fix it's cracks. By the time the next day comes, the cracks are fixed but two or three people have a sneaking suspicion that the magic is in danger. Also, yes I am planning on making more I just need to figure out how Mirabel's death impacts the events of the movie.

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    1. NoOneTwerksLikeGaston on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Jan 2022 05:59PM UTC

      I like to think, perhaps a day later, when they've taken Mirabel to the morgue or some such, they huddle to the kitchen or the inside dining area and just sit in silence.

      And then Dolores just speaks out, "Please... Please. Come home. Come home, tio Bruno." And the family is shocked and mystified and the triplets and Abuela's hearts are breaking again as they are reminded of how they've not just lost one family member, but two.

      But Dolores just turns her head to the painted Family Tree and begs, "Please... No more hiding."

      And someone knocks from the other side of the mural.

      BUT THAT'S ALL I GOT, REALLY.

      GREAT BUT HORRIBLE FIC! GREAT CAUSE IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND MADE ME CRY LIKE A STARVED BABY BUT HORRIBLE BECAUSE IT MADE ME CRY AND NOW MY EYES ARE HOT, RED, AND SWOLLEN!

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      1. inkandstone on Chapter 1 Wed 05 Jan 2022 10:50PM UTC

        OH NO PLEASE GO DRINK SOME WATER. PUTTING ICE ON YOUR EYES HELPS WITH THE SWELLING. THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLIMENT.

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