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  1. Twild36 on Chapter 3 Thu 24 Feb 2022 07:26AM UTC

    I was in the mood to reread, so here I am lol

    It's been so long since we've just had the boys interacting that I'd actually forgotten how well you write their interacts. Particularly with the way that each of them speak. Like, the way you write Techno makes it much easier to picture his voice. Or the pacing that you give the conversation, with breaths and pauses. It's really well done <3

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    1. OneSaltyErik on Chapter 3 Thu 24 Feb 2022 08:19AM UTC

      Thank you! I've been practicing keeping each character's "voice" easily identifiable within the text, I hope to be able to keep it up :)

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