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1. musicaldaydreamer on Chapter 14 Thu 10 Mar 2022 04:31PM UTC

   

   Irida the first hisuian to Actually Figure It Out
   Also the miscommunication there with Rei was both awkward and hilarious. XD

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2. 1. CureIcy on Chapter 14 Sat 12 Mar 2022 02:52PM UTC

      

      the first and not the last! trying to keep the comedy aspect without the pitfalls of "unrealistically oblivious" or "uncomfortably close to sexual harassment." it's a bit of a balancing act but! i will do my best because the dynamic of a pan disaster surrounded by very pretty people is a lot of fun to write

      the miscommunication just sort of arose naturally? like, i felt the need to talk about inspiration porn, but then i realized. ah. ah yes rei does not know what that is.

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