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1. branchcloudsky on Chapter 16 Mon 28 Mar 2022 06:58PM UTC

   

   Interesting that you have Jane and Charles reuniting so soon after Hunsford! I'm glad they talked it out and resolved thing - and that Lizzy has early evidence that maybe Darcy was listening to her and is willing tl act on it.

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2. 1. Eienvine on Chapter 16 Mon 28 Mar 2022 11:07PM UTC

      

      Yeah, I figured that the continued separation of Jane and Bingley makes sense in the books when they're living hours and days away from each other and there's no easy way to communicate, and also where it could have been considered inappropriate for Darcy to talk to Bingley about Lizzy's hints about Jane's feelings. But in a modern setting, there's no reason for him not to tell Charlie and for Charlie not to text Jane right away. So we might as well end Jane's heartache early, right? :D

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   2. 1. branchcloudsky on Chapter 16 Tue 29 Mar 2022 05:17AM UTC

         

         I'm all for it! 😀

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