Comment on The Avalon Seven

1. wam6996 on Chapter 3 Fri 22 Apr 2022 02:33PM UTC

   

   I am loving the rewrite. I don't mean to be picky, but purely as a possible aid I will mention there is still one reference to Windsor rather than Normandy:
   “Don’t be fooled, your Majesty.” Mycroft cautioned her. “Young or not. Raised by the Holmes Family or not. Hadrian Emrys-Pendragon will be a formidable King of Avalon and he won’t be anything close to a pushover. It would be in the best interest of the mundane British Monarchy and the House of Windsor to form an alliance early. Because when Hadrian Claims his Throne, there will be massive upheaval in the Wizarding World.”

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2. 1. sifshadowheart on Chapter 3 Fri 22 Apr 2022 06:24PM UTC

      

      Thank you, I've got this one fixed.

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